Cold Email Templates for SaaS Founders: Three That You Can Adapt

The anatomy of a short cold email
  1. 1One true fact
  2. 2What you do
  3. 3Why them
  4. 4One easy ask
  5. 5Sign off as a person
The short answer: a good template is a skeleton, not a script. It has one true fact about the company, one sentence on what you do, a reason you wrote to them, and one easy ask. Fill it by hand for each company, and never send one you could send to anyone.

Template 1: the observation

New message
Subject: a question about your pricing page

Hi [first name],

Your pricing page has three plans but no way to see what the middle one includes.

We help [type of company] turn visitors like that into calls, by [one sentence].

Would a ten minute call on [day] work, or should I send a short note instead?

[Your first name]

Template 2: the event

New message
Subject: saw your launch

Hi [first name],

Congratulations on launching [thing] last week.

Teams in your spot often find [specific problem] in the first month. We [one sentence on the result].

Worth a quick look?

[Your first name]

Template 3: the hire

New message
Subject: your open [role] job

Hi [first name],

I saw you are hiring a [role]. Many teams do that when [problem] gets too big for one person.

We do part of that work for you, so the new hire starts on top of it. Can I show you in ten minutes?

[Your first name]

How to adapt them

Replace every bracket with something you checked. Cut any line that could go to another company. Keep the whole email between 70 and 100 words.

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Questions

Can I reuse a cold email template?
Reuse the structure, not the words. The first line must be true for each company.
How long should a cold email be?
Between 70 and 100 words, with one ask.
Should I attach anything?
No. Attachments and images raise the chance of landing in spam. A plain text email is safest.

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